I never thought my sight would deteriorate
Appreciate? It’s too late.
The face in the mirror is just a palette of colors,
I see or I don’t, one or the other.
The times that I don’t
it’s more interesting smelling smoke
feeling soft coats
and eating egg yolks.
Nothing is what it seems
even your face is like a dream.
I liked how you showed your "sight would deteriorate" with the eyes underwater. Unless I interpreted it wrong, haha.
ReplyDeleteI like how it seems like she's drowning. I feel it goes well with the poem although it isn't literal. It's nice~
ReplyDeleteGreat use of water for this! It also has a watercolor effect that is really dreamlike.
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